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Post by latmat on Jun 11, 2019 6:17:44 GMT
What the heck, I'll share this one with you guys too.
https%3A//soundcloud.com/latmat/dont-run-and-hide
I always appreciate any comments on these.
Thanks guys.
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Post by mcarp555 on Jun 11, 2019 7:46:29 GMT
I am so jealous of your vocal ability. It makes such a difference. This one has a very cinematic quality about it; you should seriously consider finding someone to start making videos of your songs. The piano & bass work very well together. I think of the two, this one is probably the better, in terms of the construction of the piece (the writing and chords, etc.). It's more "solid".
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Post by sgulley on Jun 13, 2019 1:08:53 GMT
I'm going to agree with Mike about this song. It has a complete balance to it and not really anything that can be improved. It could almost be a duet where you could split the verses with a female singer and harmonize with each other in the chorus.
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Post by latmat on Jun 13, 2019 3:48:10 GMT
Thanks Mike and Stan!
Man it think this song would make for a great video! It would be sweet to see. I really like the bass in this one too with the piano. Thanks for the votes of confidence, it's good to know I am on the right track here.
Stan, it's funny you say that, I have been thinking about that for the last week here. It would be really easy to split up the verses in terms of the lyric too. I think I'll give that a shot.
Again, I appreciate the comments. I have a lot of half done material I am excited about hopefully I can post more tracks soon!
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Post by sgulley on Jun 14, 2019 14:36:33 GMT
Cam, just glad you are still doing this and getting better at it every year. You've produced some really good songs so I know the amount of time that it would take in order to do that. Music is like writing. The more you hash over the material; the more you can improve it.
Thanks for sharing.
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