Post by latmat on May 5, 2004 16:37:48 GMT
If anybody is curious to what Rob was sayin this is the criteria I use when doing detail critiques ;D
Critique Portion
Style
__ On target for today’s market in the genre of ___________
__ Not current sounding enough for today’ market (Not a bad thing)
__ Hard to Classify
Style Comments:
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Melody/Instrumentation
__ Good music in verses
__ Verses could be stronger
__ Good music in chorus
__ Chorus could be stronger
__ Verses/Chorus sound too similar
__ Memorable Hook
__ Hook not obvious enough
Melody/Instrumentation Comments:
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Structure/Arrangement
__ Intro too long
__ Well-written structure
__ Good sectional contrast
__ Not enough sectional contrast
__ Could use a bridge
Structure/Arrangement Comments:
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Lyric
__ First line makes me want to hear more
__ Engaging
__ Cohesive
__ Good use of imagery
__ Rhymes well
__ Lacks focus
__ Unique
__ Too abstract
__ I don't understand it
__ Too predictable
__ Too many clichés
Lyrical Comments:
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Vocal
__ Vocal does not help to show song
__ Vocal does help to show song
__ Communicates emotion to listener
__ awkward phrasing
__ Adequate Diction
__ Inadequate Diction
Vocal Comments:
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Title
__ Good title
__ So-So title
__ Cant determine title by listening
__ Could appear in a more strategic place
__ Doesn’t repeat enough
__ Repeats too often
__ Not Identifiable to song
Title Comments:
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REVIEW Portion:
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Critique Portion
Style
__ On target for today’s market in the genre of ___________
__ Not current sounding enough for today’ market (Not a bad thing)
__ Hard to Classify
Style Comments:
_________________________________________
Melody/Instrumentation
__ Good music in verses
__ Verses could be stronger
__ Good music in chorus
__ Chorus could be stronger
__ Verses/Chorus sound too similar
__ Memorable Hook
__ Hook not obvious enough
Melody/Instrumentation Comments:
_________________________________________
Structure/Arrangement
__ Intro too long
__ Well-written structure
__ Good sectional contrast
__ Not enough sectional contrast
__ Could use a bridge
Structure/Arrangement Comments:
_________________________________________
Lyric
__ First line makes me want to hear more
__ Engaging
__ Cohesive
__ Good use of imagery
__ Rhymes well
__ Lacks focus
__ Unique
__ Too abstract
__ I don't understand it
__ Too predictable
__ Too many clichés
Lyrical Comments:
_________________________________________
Vocal
__ Vocal does not help to show song
__ Vocal does help to show song
__ Communicates emotion to listener
__ awkward phrasing
__ Adequate Diction
__ Inadequate Diction
Vocal Comments:
_________________________________________
Title
__ Good title
__ So-So title
__ Cant determine title by listening
__ Could appear in a more strategic place
__ Doesn’t repeat enough
__ Repeats too often
__ Not Identifiable to song
Title Comments:
____________________________
REVIEW Portion:
______________________________
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