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Post by Spike on Oct 22, 2004 1:58:53 GMT
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Post by JimDurand on Oct 22, 2004 5:40:09 GMT
Jeff, How 'bout a link to the song Jim
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Post by mcarp555 on Oct 22, 2004 12:33:38 GMT
Guitar is good, has that Boston/Kansas 70's feel. Vocal is somewhat muddy, making it hard to hear the lyrics. I can tell it's one of your better vocals, but maybe a little less reverb, and a touch brighter EQ would do wonders. Structure-wise, it's just two verses or so. A solo or a bridge with one more verse would help pad it out past two minutes. Overall, a solid start, now build on it. ;D
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Post by JimDurand on Oct 23, 2004 5:36:37 GMT
Jeff,
I enjoyed the song. Yes the guitar does remind me of Kansas. Sounds good. How'd your wife like it?
Jim
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Post by Spike on Oct 25, 2004 18:22:12 GMT
Thanks guys.. Wife liked the song. I think I worked out a bridge/chorus over the weekend, Ive been trying all month, but couldn't put anything together. Now I have to decide if it makes the song better or worse with what I came up with. I always seem to put too much reverb, I'll clean it up for next mix.
I appreciate the feedback...
Jeff
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Post by sgulley on Oct 26, 2004 23:10:20 GMT
Adding a common bridge to both verse choruses would extend the song and make it sound more interesting. I really liked the guitar track. It sounds excellent. Vocals could be more up front.
Good song! Stan
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