sgulley
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Post by sgulley on May 13, 2006 5:33:38 GMT
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Post by mcarp555 on May 13, 2006 11:28:27 GMT
A bit depressing, lyric-wise Stan! This is okay; it doesn't grab me like some of your other tunes have. Possibly when you flesh it out a bit more on the 2488 it'll draw me in more. Guitars are great as usual. Watch the intervals in the vocal; if you don't nail them, they come across as a bit shaky.
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Post by sgulley on May 14, 2006 3:20:07 GMT
Mike. These lyrics are really depressing. It didn't start out that way, but I guess it was just the mood that I was in. I still have a good amount work left on this, if I don't decide to just record something else over the top of it. Specifically, the vocals are bad, and there is no true bass line. But something tells me that I can get a decent mix out of it if I decide to continue on...
Thanks for listening Mike, I really appreciate your comments. Stan
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Post by Tom on May 16, 2006 17:13:39 GMT
Hey Stan,
Not bad. You're right about the need for a better bass part-- without it the multiple guitars don't work very well for me.
Tom
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Post by sgulley on May 17, 2006 3:33:04 GMT
Tom. I'm going to redo the bass line, or EQ it a little differently to bring it out more. I'll finish it up probably during the coming weekend.
Thanks for listening & comments. Stan
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