Not bad for a first attempt; The organ and Mark Knofler-like lyrics draw the listener in and envelop you with a warm mellow feel. The xylophone is clear as a bell, and a nice opener. I think once the song gets going, the xylo should either play fewer notes, tho, or get mixed back further in. It tends to begin to dominate the song and could wind up sounding a bit "gimmicky". I'd like the organ slightly more upfront as well. The song seems to fade out in mid-verse, with the music leaving the lyrics hanging.
But overall, I like the feel, and think with a bit more remixing it can only improve. A good start, and hopefully there will be more in this vein to come. Good job.
Edit - I've added the link to the list of SC pages in the Member Music Links area.
Good suggestion I agree on the bells and the ending. I think my main problem is that i tend to get bored with songs and move on to the next one before polishing with words, mixing and overall composition. I'm working on going back to the many that I've created in the past and refining them instead of total abandonment.