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Post by latmat on Aug 18, 2006 4:11:44 GMT
Hey guys I have a few new ones up on soundclick feel free to listen and drop me a note eh!!!
Isolation and Cold are the latest songs on there!
Hope ya'll check it out and enjoy!
Cameron
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Post by Digital Kettle on Aug 18, 2006 12:32:11 GMT
Posted you a Soundclick message ;-)
I liked 'Cold'...I like 'Isolation' even more. I got a RHCP-vibe from the guitar and bass. Nice harmony work too.
If I could contribute one bit of constructive criticism: have you ever thought of hooking up with a drummer...maybe someone who works on collaborations over the internet? Losing the drum-machine sounds would really 'ice the cake', imho.
Cheers, David.
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Post by mcarp555 on Aug 19, 2006 22:44:36 GMT
'Cold' I've already mentioned in an email before this was posted.
'Isolation' - I agree with David about the quality of the guitar & bass. The harmony is good - is it you, or an effect? There's a funny little quavering somewhere in the 800Hz-1200Hz range? Might be reverb from different sources interacting, or the bass making things a bit muddy. Sounds like good use of compression, in that everything is upfront in the mix. The abrupt cutoff for the instruments at the end of the choruses is maybe too abrupt? I'd plump for letting it ring to silence, then coming in with the next line. But that may just be a matter of taste.
The 2488 and the keyboard are working out well for you. A good solid tune. Go to college and make us all proud.
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