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Post by latmat on Jul 31, 2007 13:02:30 GMT
Hello People
I gotta say I'm not used to doing these faster songs... You gotta take a way different aproach to the drums specially or else its just mayhem lol...
The New song is Called Hesitation... Something about this song reminds me of a musical or something. I just saw Hairspray so maybe that why lol...
Anywho... Whould apprecriate any suggestions or comments on the track as a whole... Pretty tired mixing this but hey I think it came out decent but I'm sure there is room for improvement...
oh link is in signature...
THanks !!!!! Cameron
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Post by mcarp555 on Jul 31, 2007 14:45:29 GMT
I really like this - it's a great little pop tune, and moves along nice and brisk. The little stop in the middle works well, but I was expecting a sweet, tuneful solo after it.
What needs work in a serious way is the mix. The panned acoustics are stomping all over the lead vocal, and the electric guitar is slightly muddy and mixed too far in back. When the backing vocal comes in at the end of the chorus, it completely drowns out the lead. I can't say for sure whether the vocal needs to come up, or the acoustics need to come down; probably a little of both.
Just a bit more tweaking, and this could be a great number. Give yourself a day or two to let the ears rest, then come back at it fresh and fix it up.
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Post by sgulley on Aug 2, 2007 11:37:24 GMT
I really like this song and there is nothing wrong with any of the recorded tracks at all. I just think it needs some opening up a little more to breathe. If you have the BBE plugin or a Sonic Max. rack I think it would help. Great song with a few minor tweaks. Lots of sound! That is what I really like.
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Post by Tom on Aug 13, 2007 18:56:04 GMT
A very nice song! I'm with Mike on on both the unevenness of the mix, especially the lead fills being too far back, and the need for a solo. In the case of thee latter, I would consider replacing the next to last chorus with one. I like the lyric, save for one thing -- "is causing me aggrevation" comes across as a forced rhyme to me. I would make it simply "is holding me down" or something like that.
But all that aside, its still a very nice song.
Tom
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