sgulley
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Post by sgulley on Aug 18, 2007 23:12:21 GMT
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Post by mcarp555 on Aug 19, 2007 21:35:48 GMT
Well, that was an experience!
Interesting beginning, then a complete 180 into the meat of the song. I like it, flaws and all. It has an easy manner that would help some of your more serious Christian songs.
One thing that grates on me is the lead guitar during the "Circle be unbroken" line (2nd & 3rd chorus). It really clashes with the melody just in that line.
Wish it had a better ending, even if you just edit in a few copies of the chorus and fade out.
I have no idea what it's about, but understanding is not a requirement...
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sgulley
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Post by sgulley on Aug 19, 2007 21:49:54 GMT
You brought up some really good points: does it even need a lead guitar track at all? The ending went off literally on a weird sustained note, and the lyrics were a bit anti-social or sateric about society. Thanks Mike for comments, I always look forward to what you are going to say. Stan
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