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Post by latmat on Dec 14, 2014 21:57:30 GMT
https%3A//soundcloud.com/latmat/what-i-need-you-to-knowHey Guys, Well, I decided to say enough is enough and post something. This one has been a real pain in my neck lol, after trying a bunch of stuff with other instruments I keep finding my self enjoying it more stripped down. Would definitely appreciate your thoughts on this one and if anything could be improved upon... I think its a good song, and definitely want it on the album. This makes 12, one more to go... then a bunch more work lol... Thanks again guys!
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Post by mcarp555 on Dec 15, 2014 9:13:51 GMT
Solid. Very solid. The playing, singing, lyrics, construction, mix, all right on. But I hear what you're saying as well - does it need any more? If so, what? My first thought was strings (my default answer to everything). Then I thought, no, flute. But I'm not sure. It's a bit like a mound of sand - how much can you add before the whole thing collapses under its own weight? Probably the best thing to do is leave it for now and let it percolate in the back of the mind for a bit.
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Post by sgulley on Dec 15, 2014 15:58:15 GMT
Very pretty track. A female backup vocal in parts would really enhance IMO.
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Post by latmat on Dec 15, 2014 19:32:09 GMT
Thanks for listening my guys...
Ya Mike I think your right maybe something will come but if not I think I can live with it as is too. Glad the rest was on point; it's one of those dynamic and vulnerable songs where I can't just belt it out non stop lol...
Stan, you know I thought about maybe a female voice... My ego has so far stopped me lol, I for some reason want to do this whole thing with just my self lol. I've gone this far already! I know silly right lol, I totally get it and may pursue that still.
Thanks for the listen guys hopefully I can get this thing done soon.
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